It's 2020 and where are the first people to land on mars, Kade and I were getting prepared for the Mission, we put our clothes on and hopped on the Spacecraft and then blasted into Hyperdrive!
When we got there we jumped off the Spacecraft and stabbed the flag on the moon. When we placed the flag down we felt like we were the best in the world, but at the time we were worried about how we were going to get home.
We hopped back in the Spacecraft and headed for home, but it wasn't all over. Meteors were flying straight towards us. We took hard impact, our Hyperdrive broke so it would be hard to get home from here now. We tried for hours but nothing worked, I thought it would be the last of us, but we found we can use the escape pod, so we did. It could get us home, but I thought that we might land on a different continent, we took it and guess what happened we made it safe and sound . it was great to see our good world and surroundings again.
Where would you want to go in space?
Thursday, April 2, 2020
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Hi Josh, what a creative idea for your blog about space! Do you like space movies? It sounds like you know a bit about how spaceships fly. If you had the chance to visit any planet, what would it be?
ReplyDeleteWow Josh, what a great piece of writing you have used lots of great vocabulary in your story.
ReplyDeleteNext time could you add in an image to your writing, or you could ask your audience to draw a picture for you from what you have written?
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